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2007-12-17 15:25:04
#131
Originally Posted by llaprad1
Good to see someone else from the Design industry perspective.

Debunk, you've got a good start, but I think they're a little simple. There are probably some subtle ways to convey elements that are more thought out. Instead of black, play with really subtle shades of grey (like 60-80% black). Or tasteful gradients.

I would open up the tracking just a hair, at small scales, those spaces are going to close up.

Colors need to be tied a little more directly to the layout Crim is using. I'm not sure about the limitations of the various versions of vBulletin, but I think he's limited to using their icons. (Crim, do you know the answer to this?)

Also, you might want to do a left-justified version. If you do a quick mock-up with a screenshot you'll see if it works or not. With the pending ad banners on the right, you may be limited to the top left for placement.

Personally, I think the first one is a more playful and skilled use of spatial relationships. And if you have time, I'd actually like to see a custom-designed '20' to match the "SE-R" 'S' and 'R'.

Good start!


I agree with your feedback, I intentionally didn't conform to the colors hoping to persuade a change, it's just too default-minty for me. I need to play with the tracking on the smaller type because you're right, when converting to jpg or gif, the pixelation does interfere with the spacing.

About placement, I intend for it to come off the left side of the upper corner, but that may change or the design may change to compensate for any sort of issues. If there's anything I've learned about design, I've come to understand that flexibility is key.

If my images are considered, I'd be willing to try to create a "2" and "0" that match the custom Sentra SR look. I just didn't want to rush to make something crappy with the time I had. It will take a bit of trial and error to get it to look right. I never have any intentions on designing a typeface!
2007-12-17 15:26:23
#132
The best way may be to tackle the masthead first, then move onto the other stuff.

It'd be a lot of wasted time to go down one path, only to have a different solution altogether approved. Kind of like an album package, work to get the cover approved, then complete the booklet and other art.

On the other hand, it is proper to keep in mind (or notes or thumbnails) what you may do for a comps full solution, but fleshing it out is usually a waste of time.

Debunk, for future career reference...the client more often than not rejects your favorite/most effective proposals. Or they revise them beyond recognition.
2007-12-17 15:27:22
#133
Originally Posted by debunk
I never have any intentions on designing a typeface!


LOL, if you did you could make extra cash in these circles! Although most people would want a free download.
2007-12-17 15:38:43
#134
I really like debunk's design. I think that you should use the word "enthusiast" as opposed to "members" though.
2007-12-17 16:03:01
#135
Oh, one thing I noticed...you'll really need to integrate the dash in there somewhere. That revision will probably require a re-think of the type treatment.
2007-12-18 16:44:20
#136
in the empty space to left toss in an exploded view of the sr20 motor this would look good on debunk idea
2007-12-18 19:43:38
#137
I like llprads the best! I also like Debunk's format, but I think it would be better with a car 'in action' on the left side.
2007-12-18 23:42:06
#138
llaprad is the man. I like how he thinks.

Also I do agree the layout needs to be tweaked a bit.

Debunks 3rd one looks the best of all three though
2007-12-19 01:12:47
#139
couple of hours brainstroming. after my finals are over tonight.....maybe ill work on some ideas if the forum members allow me to.




same bkg different style.





i know it is overkill but just throwing ideas around.

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2007-12-19 03:55:35
#140
^that bottom one is pretty sweet
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